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You did it!

by Ruth
(England)

Well here we are my daughter dear
The day awaited for many a year
All the turmoil, tears and triumph
All wrapped up in a graduate gown.
You tried so hard to win this battle
and no one knows how hard that was.
From teenage years you have had to struggle
with illness always hanging in the balance.
The others seemed so strong and cheery
wanting to party,drink and be merry.
But for you the listless body was weary
and many a night you cried in agony.
Yet your heart was willing to see it through
and with gritted teeth kept going on.
The lectures you missed were so many
with days in bed followed by night oil burning.
You did your best despite body shaking!
Day and night you laboured on
'Will I be alright' your mantra cried
to worried Mum and anxious Father.
'Yes of course my daughter dear'
Our stock reply; but did we know
was this a delay or maybe the end?
You saw it through, I don't know how
but here we are and we are so proud.
Today is Yours, you've earned the glory
God bless you darling daughter.


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You did it!

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Nov 02, 2011
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Emotional
by: Ruby A

We can all read the emotion involved in this wonderful poem. You clearly have had your motherly concern for your daughter over the years. I see in the words that your daughter has had a tough time over the past years. The poem gives a great sense of how you have felt about it all and your daughters courage. I am sure you have all worked hard together in a hugely loving and supportive way. It is quite heartbreaking to think of the struggle she must have had.
As a poem this is a fantastic piece of writing which grabs a hold of you and gives us a little tear in our eye. Congratulations on your great poem.

Nov 02, 2011
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Brilliant
by: Lena

A quite brilliant poem, well written and a truly fabulous real life victory against adversity.

Nov 02, 2011
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Brilliant
by: Chris P Martin

A poem with real emotion and clearly a passionate dedication to your daughter. You must be so proud of her. Outstanding poem.

Jun 21, 2009
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Touching
by: Susan

This was very touching. You sound like an amazing family. Thanks for sharing it.

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